Learning English-draft 1
Learning English is very important in Taiwan now. For example, if you want to find a good job, you should be good at English. Many schools take English seriously, because they know that English is significant when we graduate or we enter the international. But learning English is not an easy thing to do, many people will give up in the course, they thing English is too difficult to learn. Although someone wants to give up, it does still have many people love learning English, they love English, and they know the importance of English, so they learn very happily. All of we should learn English, and we can keep up with the step of the world.

6 Comments:
At 7:35 PM,
Butterfly said…
第八行thing打錯
第十行it does 我覺得用there are 比較好
倒數第三行All of us
倒數第二行的意思是要連接這個世界的話我覺得用connect比較好
At 7:49 PM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
when we graduate or we enter the international.
第二個we 應該可以不用
they love English, and they know the importance of English, so they learn very happily. 這一段好像有點饒舌
At 6:31 AM,
許雅婷 said…
1.they thing English is 的thing打錯了
2. Although 開頭的那句太長了點,可以刪掉they love English,
At 7:47 PM,
梁宜靜 said…
Many schools take English seriously, because they know that English is significant when we graduate or we enter the international. ->不懂意思!!
they thing English is too difficult to learn->they "think"~
At 7:50 PM,
Tina said…
they "thing" English is->they think English.....
Although那一句太長ㄌ,可以把他簡短or變成幾句話!!
At 1:48 AM,
FawnYma said…
1.they "think" English is too difficult to learn.
好了,我要走了…881
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