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Sunday, February 25, 2007

Tips For Staying Healthy-draft 1

How do you stay healthy? I think many people have their own ways to stay healthy. There are some tips for staying healthy that I think. First, we should have a good habit of food, for example, to eat a lot of vegetables and fruits. Second, excise is important, we have to excise very often, and it can make us healthier. Finally, if we want to stay our healthy, have a good sleep is necessary. The tips of staying healthy are very simple, but if we didn’t do those tips definitely, it also without results.

7 Comments:

  • At 7:28 PM, Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said…

    but if we didn’t do those tips definitely,
    didn't 是不是要用現在式

     
  • At 7:38 PM, Blogger FawnYma said…

    1."I think" there are some tips for staying healthy 我覺得I think放前面比較順
    2.excise 這…這什麼啊? 好好笑喔!妳的er咧?

     
  • At 7:38 PM, Blogger 梁宜靜 said…

    1..to eat a lot of vegetables and fruits->to不用加
    2.. excise ->exercise
    3..we have to excise very often->前面要加連接詞!!

     
  • At 10:56 PM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    1.There are some tips for staying healthy that I think我覺得I think 擺最前面比較順,但我不知這樣文法有沒有錯啦

    2.First, we should have a good habit of food, for example, to eat a lot of vegetables and fruits. 我覺得we should make it a habit of food而且for example那邊最好大寫,另成一句,要不然句子有點過長。

     
  • At 9:37 PM, Blogger 許雅婷 said…

    1.excise拼錯了
    2., have a good sleep is necessary應該是having a good sleep

     
  • At 6:41 PM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    我還沒改完,繼續
    1.have a good sleep is necessary用having

     
  • At 4:42 AM, Blogger Tina said…

    excise??
    excise is important->To take/get exercise is important
    "and"we have to excise very often
    to stay our "healthy"->health
    but if we "didn’t"->為何要用過去式?
    have a good sleep is necessary->sleeping well is necessary

     

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