A Tired Trip
Today my aunt and my cousin were going back to Taipei, because they afraid of traffic jam after the New Year's Day. And they invited me to go to Taipei with them, I though about that for a while, because I seem that I still had many homework did not do yet. But my answer was that I wanted to go Taipei very much! Then we set out at 2 p.m., but there had a problem, which was that it has traffic jam, too… We proceed very slowly. The driver who was my mom was pretty tired, so we went to rest station. Can you believe that? When we arrived Taipei, it’s 10 p.m. already. It spent 8 hours, and everyone was so tired. It’s really a tired trip, wasn’t it?
posted by 傻咩 @ 3:59 AM
5 Comments:
At 7:32 PM,
FawnYma said…
1.they "were" afraid of traffic jam after the New Year's Day.
2."It seemed" that I still had many homework "to…"
3.there "was" a problem
At 7:33 PM,
梁宜靜 said…
1..because they "were" afraid of traffic jam after the New Year's Day.
2.. I though about that for a while->that怪怪滴!!
3.. I wanted to go "to" Taipei very much!
At 7:37 PM,
Celia said…
"because I seem that I still had many homework did not do yet."應該是it seems 噢！
At 7:19 AM,
Samantha＊霓∥ said…
It’s really a tired trip,
tired重覆 可以找個代替的
At 4:48 AM,
Tina said…
my cousin "were going" back to->went back
because前面不用加逗號
I "though"->thought
go Taipei->go to Taipei
it’s 10 p.m. already->it's already 10 p.m.
"It’s" really a tired trip->It was
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