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Computers
Computers play an important role in our lives, they can help students hand in the homework quickly, and they also can help people transmit the information, as long as you turn on the computers, you must fall in love with them. However, you have to be sure to remind yourself that do not sit in front of the computers for a long time, most of the parents don’t like their children depend on the computers too muck, particularly the discussion on the bulletin board is pretty waste time.
TV programs
It is important to choose the TV programs be careful. Although TV is essential channel for provide the information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantage. Some of the programs are full of violence and lust that have an unhealthy influence on the teenagers. And take muck time to watch the TV will do harm to eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which are good for your body and mind. The most important is that don’t be a tellyholic.
Computers play an important role in our lives, they can help students hand in the homework quickly, and they also can help people transmit the information, as long as you turn on the computers, you must fall in love with them. However, you have to be sure to remind yourself that do not sit in front of the computers for a long time, most of the parents don’t like their children depend on the computers too muck, particularly the discussion on the bulletin board is pretty waste time.
TV programs
It is important to choose the TV programs be careful. Although TV is essential channel for provide the information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantage. Some of the programs are full of violence and lust that have an unhealthy influence on the teenagers. And take muck time to watch the TV will do harm to eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which are good for your body and mind. The most important is that don’t be a tellyholic.
posted by 傻咩 @ 8:24 PM
6 Comments:
At 2:57 AM,
FawnYma said…
1.most of the parents don’t like their children depend on the computers too "muck"… 是much
2.particularly the discussion on the bulletin board is pretty waste time.
我覺得particularly…可以獨立成句，而且這句怪怪的，"Particularly,discussing
on the bulletin board wastes much time"
3.It is important to choose the TV programs "carefully"
4.Although TV is "an"essential channel "that provides" the information and entertainment
At 6:51 AM,
許雅婷 said…
1.the computers應該不用the
2.too muck打錯了
3.choose the TV programs be careful.是carefully
4.for provide加ing
At 5:55 AM,
Samantha＊霓∥ said…
1.computers 前面加The 比較好
muck>>much
2.it "may" have some>>可以用might
muck>>much
tellyholic是什麼 ?我找不到這個字
At 8:08 PM,
Butterfly said…
1.Computers play an important role in our lives那個應該是life
2.However之前那個逗點太多了，可以分句一下
3.most of the parents don’t like their children depend on the computers too muck那個depend前面加個to 要不然兩個動詞卡在一起, 而且much拼錯了
4., particularly the discussion on the bulletin board is pretty waste time.
那個particularly前面要用分號之後再用逗點，而且那個waste要加s
5.It is important to choose the TV programs be careful那個用be 怪怪的，可以用carefully
6.Although TV is essential channel for provide the information and entertainment那個for 要用 to
7.Some of the programs are full of violence and lust that have an unhealthy influence on the teenagers應該不只一個不好的影響，所以我覺得用複數比較好
8. And take muck time to watch the TV will do harm to eyesight那個用taking比較好，而且much 又拼錯了
9.總而言之句點跟逗點要用好
At 8:43 PM,
Tina said…
好像都是逗號ㄟ....
be careful->carefully
At 7:42 PM,
Celia said…
Computers play an important role in our "life".
It is important to choose the TV programs "carefully".
：］
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