A Frightening Experience(draft2)

I never forget the day when I was ten years old. I went to Thailand with my family. In the third day of the trip, we went to see the python. It was very big and scaring, but I though it was very novel to me. As soon as we prepared for going to the next site, I saw an attention-getting fountain; I paid too much attention to the fountain to take my eyes off that. Turning back, I couldn’t find my parents. I was very nervous, so I looked around and wanted to cry. I thought that I couldn’t speak Thai or English very well; moreover I couldn't help but think whether can I go back to Taiwan safely or not. I really had no idea, being pretty scared. Suddenly, I saw a familiar person pass by me. He was my grandpa! It was so great to see him. I promised that I would never do it again.

A Frightening Experience(draft1)

I’ll never forget the day when I was ten years old. I went to Thailand with my family. In the third day of the trip, we went to see the python. It was very big and scared, but I though it very novel to me. As soon as we prepared going the next site, I saw an attention getting fountain, I kept an eye on that for a while. Turning back, I couldn’t find my parents. I was very nervous, so I saw around and wanted to cry. I thought that I couldn’t speak Thai or English very well, and could I go back to Taiwan safely? I really had no idea, and I was pretty scared. Suddenly, I saw a familiar person pass by me. That was my grandpa! It was so great to see him. I promised that I would never do it again.

A Dream I Had (draft 2)

Many people usually have dreams; sometimes it’s sweet; but sometime it’s very horrible. When I was four years old, and my brother was still a one-year-old baby. One day, I had a dreadful dream. I dreamed that I was at the dock, and I saw my brother fell over the sea. I was scared and didn’t do anything. I wanted to save him, but I couldn’t. Cried with tears streaming, and then my brother was drowned. At the same time, my father panicked called me to get up, asking me what happened. I was still suffering from the shock, keeping crying. Maybe the dream wanted to tell me that I should take care of my brother. Although we usually quarrel now, I think that I still don’t want to lose him.

A Dream I Had (draft 1)

Many people usually have a dream; sometimes it’s sweet; but sometime it’s very horrible. When I was four years old, my brother was still a one-year-old baby. One day, I had a horrible dream. I dreamed that I was at the dock, and I saw my brother fall over the sea. I was scared and didn’t do anything. I wanted to save him, but I couldn’t…I cried with tears streaming, and then my brother was drowning. At the same time, my father panicky called me to get up, and asked me what happen. I was still suffering from the shock, keeping crying. Maybe the dream wanted to tell me that I should took care of my brother. Although we usually quarrel now, I think that I still don’t want to lose him.

Translation-draft3

ComputersComputers play an important role in our life. They can help students hand in their homework quickly, and they also can help people send information. As long as you turn on the computers, you must fall in love with them. However, you have to be sure to remind yourself not to sit in front of the computers for a long time. Most of the parents don’t like their children to depend on the computers too much, especially discussion on the bulletin board wastes much time.

TV programsIt is important to choose TV programs carefully. Although TV is an essential channel to provide information and entertainment, it might have some disadvantage. Some of the programs which are full of violence and lust have negative influences on teenagers. And spending much time watching TV will do harm to eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which are good for our body and mind. The most important is that we can’t be a tellyholic.

Autobiography(draft2)part2

My favorite sport is badminton. When I was a child, my father always took me and my little brother to play the badminton. So I’m fond of playing badminton now. On the other hand, I also like some indoor activities like singing songs. I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl. I always sing in the shower. Thanks to my mom give me a good voice.

I have made up my mind to study the accounting after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into the National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. In order to make my dream come true, I will do my level best.

Making Decisions(draft2)

Growing up means making my own decisions. My age is old enough that I can be responsible for my own decisions. I’m not a childlike girl as I used to be anymore because I’m growing up. I should be much more independent, and I don’t need to rely on other people instead I can do by myself. Therefore, I should start to learn to make decisions by myself.

The hardest decision that I ever made was going to the cram school. I don’t like study if nobody pressed me to do this, but if my parents pressed me too much, I don’t like, either. So I decided to go to the cram school, and I think it’s better that I hate the cram school’s teachers instead of my parents. I also can study harder than I study alone. It’s kill two birds with one stone.

Making decisions(draft1)

Growing up means making my own decisions. My age is old enough that I can be responsible for my own decisions. I’m not a childlike girl like before anymore, because I’m growing up. I’m much more independent, and I don’t need to rely on other people, I can do myself. Therefore, it should be start to learn make decisions by myself.

The hardest decision that I ever made was going to the cram school. I don’t like studying if nobody pressed me to study, but if my parents pressed me too much, I don’t like, either. So I decided to go to the cram school, and it’s okay that I hate them instead to my parents. I also can study harder than I study alone. It’s kill two birds with one stone.

Computers (draft2)

Computers play a more and more important role in our daily life. It gives us many entertainments, as we know many teenagers like to play the on-line games, and we can surf the Net to know the latest news. We also can use the computer to communicate with each other, such as chating with friends, and use the Skype to call the abroad people.

Personally, I have a liking for computers. First, even if my friend and I don’t need to meet face to face, we still can chat with each other by computers, it is really convenient. Second, I can call my mom if she goes to China on business. Then, I can relax myself by surfing the Net. To be sure, the personal computer has become a very good companion we can't do without.