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Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Making decisions(draft1)

Growing up means making my own decisions. My age is old enough that I can be responsible for my own decisions. I’m not a childlike girl like before anymore, because I’m growing up. I’m much more independent, and I don’t need to rely on other people, I can do myself. Therefore, it should be start to learn make decisions by myself.

The hardest decision that I ever made was going to the cram school. I don’t like studying if nobody pressed me to study, but if my parents pressed me too much, I don’t like, either. So I decided to go to the cram school, and it’s okay that I hate them instead to my parents. I also can study harder than I study alone. It’s kill two birds with one stone.

8 Comments:

  • At 6:15 AM, Blogger Celia said…

    ...it should be start to learn "make" decisions by myself.

    應該用"making"

    I don’t like studying if nobody pressed me to "study"

    如果改成"nobody pressed me to do this"感覺會比較順

     
  • At 6:22 AM, Blogger FawnYma said…

    1. I’m not a childlike girl "as I used to be" anymore
    2.I "should be" much more independent, and I don’t need to rely on other people.
    我覺得 I can do myself.可以分開寫
    3."I" should start to learn "to" make decisions by myself.
    4.and it’s okay that I hate them instead to my parents. 怪怪的…

     
  • At 8:49 AM, Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said…

    1.anymore, because I’m growing up.>>不用逗號
    2.and I don’t need to rely on other people,"instead",I can do "by" myself
    3.and it’s okay that I hate them instead to my parents.>>這句有點難懂

     
  • At 6:09 AM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    1.I’m not a childlike girl like before anymore, because I’m growing up. 那個because前面不用逗號

    2.it should be start to learn make decisions by myself.
    應該should start就好了,而且learn後面要ing

    3.and it’s okay that I hate them instead to my parents.那個instead 後面要加of,而且用it's okay很怪,用I think it's better that

    4.內容有點過短,而且還是老問題,你的句子一直過長,一直用逗號,而且連接詞有點貧乏,可以嘗試把句子結束,用適當的連接詞重新開始

     
  • At 5:09 AM, Blogger Ryuka(暐) said…

    I’m not a childlike girl like before anymore, because I’m growing up.
    because前面不用,吧
    and it’s okay that I hate them instead to my parents.
    這句的意思是??@@

     
  • At 5:48 AM, Blogger 許雅婷 said…

    1. I’m not a childlike girl like before anymore這句稍微修改一下
    2.it should be start to learn make decisions by myself.應該是I should start

     
  • At 7:36 AM, Blogger 梁宜靜 said…

    it should be start to learn make decisions by myself.->怪怪的!!
    instead to ->instead of

     
  • At 8:35 PM, Blogger Tina said…

    because前面不用逗號
    it should "start" to learn "making" decisions by myself.

     

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