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Sunday, April 15, 2007

Autobiography draft-1 (part1)

My name is Ping Yu Guo. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. There are five people in my family. My father is a public servant. My mother is a accountant in a private company. I have an older brother and a younger brother. Now let me introduce myself.

I live in Tainan where there is a small city with friendliness. In my elementary school days, my classmates were almost all my neighbors. Playing hide-and-seek, skipping ropes, etc. were our activities. During my childhood, my life was colorful and happy.

When I studied in the junior high school, my grades were bad, especially in English. So I went to the cram school. My new English teacher, Miss Li, was an excellent teacher. I was lucky to be taught by her. During the class, she taught me how to learn English. My English grades became better and better from then on. Sometimes I made a mistake, I was not blamed. She always wanted me to face the problem and solved it. By and by, my grades got better except in English. I felt she was a nice teacher in my Junior High School life.

After the Joint Entrance Examination of Senior High Schools, and I entered a vocational school and chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. At first, everyone told me to study English is grate, because it is useful in our future, but I become aware of that I’m not interested in English that I always got bad grades. I think I make a wrong decision. So I want to choose Accounting Department to major in the future. I must take my parents' advice in my mind that I choose what I love and love what I have chosen.

7 Comments:

  • At 6:37 AM, Blogger FawnYma said…

    1.My mother is "an" accountant in a private company.
    2.Sometimes I made a mistake, I was not blamed. 我覺得... And even when I made mistakes, she wouldn't blame me.
    3.I’m not interested in English that I always "got" bad grades.這句怪怪的,而且時態不一樣

     
  • At 10:06 PM, Blogger Celia said…

    "At first, everyone told me to study English is grate,..."妳應該是想打"great"吧?
    "I think I make a wrong decision."
    應該是 I think I made a wrong decision.

     
  • At 6:38 AM, Blogger 許雅婷 said…

    1.were our activities.這句話沒主詞
    2.study English is grate打錯字

     
  • At 7:20 AM, Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said…

    My mother is a accountant in a private >>an
    study English is grate>>great

     
  • At 7:37 AM, Blogger 梁宜靜 said…

    1..My mother is "a" accountant in a private company->an
    2..Playing hide-and-seek, skipping ropes, etc"." were our activities.->標點符號怪怪的!!
    3..grate->great

     
  • At 6:00 AM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    雖然老師說可以模仿啦,不過還是自己的句子多一點比較好

     
  • At 6:30 AM, Blogger Tina said…

    My mother is "an" accountant...
    I think I "made" a wrong decision.
    that I always "get" bad grades.
    study English is "great".

     

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