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Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Autobiography drift-1(part2)

My favorite sport is badminton. When I was young, my father always took me and my little brother to play the badminton. So I very like to play badminton now. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like singing songs. I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl, I always like to sing in the shower, and thanks to my mom give me a good voice.

I have made up my mind to study the accounting after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into the National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. In order to have my dream come true, I will do my level best.

5 Comments:

  • At 7:39 PM, Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said…

    1.I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl>>到這裡應該可以斷句
    2.I always like to sing in the shower, and thanks to my mom give me a good voice.>>and後面接的句子怪怪的

     
  • At 7:41 PM, Blogger 許雅婷 said…

    1.So I very like to play badminton now.應該是I like to play badminton
    very much now.
    2.In order to have my dream come true, I will do my level best.
    應該把have改成make,然後I will do my best就好了

     
  • At 7:41 PM, Blogger FawnYma said…

    1.So I like to play badminton "very much" now.
    2.I also like some "indoor" activities like singing songs.
    我覺得啦!
    3.I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl"." I always like to sing in the shower, and "thanks to my mom give me a good voice."
    thanks to 加名詞
    4.In order to "make" my dream come true, I will do my level best.
    我覺得make比較順

     
  • At 7:44 PM, Blogger Ryuka(暐) said…

    When I was young
    用young有點怪怪的
    In order to have my dream come true
    不是have應該是make

     
  • At 7:54 PM, Blogger Butterfly said…

    1.So I very like to play badminton now.用like .....very much

    2.老問題,你知道的

     

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