Autobiography drift-1(part2)
My favorite sport is badminton. When I was young, my father always took me and my little brother to play the badminton. So I very like to play badminton now. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like singing songs. I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl, I always like to sing in the shower, and thanks to my mom give me a good voice.
I have made up my mind to study the accounting after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into the National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. In order to have my dream come true, I will do my level best.
I have made up my mind to study the accounting after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into the National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. In order to have my dream come true, I will do my level best.

5 Comments:
At 7:39 PM,
Samantha*霓∥ said…
1.I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl>>到這裡應該可以斷句
2.I always like to sing in the shower, and thanks to my mom give me a good voice.>>and後面接的句子怪怪的
At 7:41 PM,
許雅婷 said…
1.So I very like to play badminton now.應該是I like to play badminton
very much now.
2.In order to have my dream come true, I will do my level best.
應該把have改成make,然後I will do my best就好了
At 7:41 PM,
FawnYma said…
1.So I like to play badminton "very much" now.
2.I also like some "indoor" activities like singing songs.
我覺得啦!
3.I wanted to be a singer when I was a little girl"." I always like to sing in the shower, and "thanks to my mom give me a good voice."
thanks to 加名詞
4.In order to "make" my dream come true, I will do my level best.
我覺得make比較順
At 7:44 PM,
Ryuka(暐) said…
When I was young
用young有點怪怪的
In order to have my dream come true
不是have應該是make
At 7:54 PM,
Butterfly said…
1.So I very like to play badminton now.用like .....very much
2.老問題,你知道的
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